“Good Worker” by Pauli Meinecke. Fiction
Right away we are drawn into the piece with this unique dynamic between sisters that is usually considered taboo at their mature age,
“People thought it was weird that Renee and I often shared a bed during the summer. I never understood why. We were sisters, and it was fun talking to each other until the last possible second before we fell asleep.”
The narrator herself is also compelling because of her lack of desire to prepare for the day shown when she knows she will end up in a mad scramble but doesn’t care, she just wants to do what she wants. She is her own person and although she thinks about all the things she must do in the day, feed cats, get gas, go to work, she starts her day out doing what she wants. And what she wants is to snort pills and take a shot.
It’s also compelling and unusual that she works under her sister at a fast food restaurant and brings her booze and weed. This excites her and she looks forward to drinking with her sister at work.
While reading I had two different reactions and I’m not sure which one the author intended but here is my thoughts. First as I read it I felt like the narrator must be down about life to be filling it up with so much alcohol and drugs and simply lacking motivation to get on with the day.
But then as I read through the story a second time I felt that this is just about someone who does exactly what they want when they want. They aren’t hurting anyone, she’s going to her job, has an understanding and close relationship to her sister and they know how to communicate with each other.
I feel my second reaction is most accurate. Either way the piece is well written and the details make every action vivid and compelling. And I love how at the end we are left with the words “Sunday funday,” and that is exactly what the day is going to be working with her sister.